delicate flower please make your appearance----don't let me hold my swallowed breath any longer
hold me until my blood runs warmer than it's usual composition-----i won't break
ask me and i will share----question me and i will run-----is it too much to want-----how do i know
so love and life and emotions get all turned around---i know that somewhere there is constancy and completeness---i won't give up----i have no choice but to continue
of all the times in ones life----the sweet and the bitter----that stirring remains----
sometimes it chokes and smothers---others, it calms and protects
so open little blossom of hope in my waiting spirit and let me inhale again
So tender, so insightful. Thank you.
ReplyDeletethank you susan <3
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, friend. I can feel such emotion behind your words.
ReplyDeletethank you dana <3
DeleteLovely. A great pick up in the middle of the day :)
ReplyDeletethanks carol :)
DeleteThat was beautiful. Short and yet so emotional.
ReplyDeletethank you so much christine :)
DeleteYes! May that blossom of hope open up so soon...
ReplyDeletei am counting on it--thank you meredith :)
DeleteWow. Just wow.
ReplyDeletethat's so sweet---thank you judy :)
DeleteSo touching and powerful..Thank you for sharing this. xo
ReplyDeletethank you so much for reading sherri :)
DeleteI hope the blossom of hope does bloom soon
ReplyDeletebetty
me too--thanks betty :)
DeleteHoping for your blossom of hope.
ReplyDeletei appreciate that susan <3
Deletei guess this poem is more apt for today :)
ReplyDeletei can see why you might think that deeps :)
DeleteSuch a lovely poem!
ReplyDeletethanks sherry :)
DeleteHoping and waiting can be so difficult at times. Very emotional poem today!
ReplyDeletewaiting will prove to be the hardest---thanks theresa <3
DeleteBeautiful :) I hope you have a wonderful Valentine's Day :)
ReplyDeletethank you--i hope your day was good :)
DeleteReally beautiful! Happy Valentine's Day!
ReplyDeletethanks marie--same to you!
DeleteWow this is very lovely writing.
ReplyDelete~Keith
why thank you very much keith!
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